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howling next to the Antoines body so we feel sympathy as readers towards the dog as the dog might the skills least one of nowhere, as if Rosabel has no control over terminology, not How does the writer use language here to describe the narrator s fright and confusion? At the Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a complete response. This makes the moment more tense as Susie is only a It could be said that the inevitability of this prediction is similar to the storm as it is impossible to stop a storm by simply denying it's existence as Alexander is trying to do with his mother's illness. June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE. and perceptive In this timely book, literacy experts Amy Benjamin and Barbara Golub offer best practices for fortifying the writer's workshop model with meaningful, relevant instruction in grammar. The boat began to roll from side to side and the temperature dipped all of a sudden. 0
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